Презентация по теме "Личное письмо в формате ОГЭ английский язык"

Personal

Letter

Личное письмо Personal Letter

Пишут знакомым, друзьям, родственникам

Рассказывают последние новости, личные проблемы

Запрашивают нужную информацию, совет

Разговорный (неофициальный) стиль

Адрес/

дата

Приветствие/ обращение (Greeting)

Вступление (Opening remarks)

Основная часть (Main body)

Заключение (Closing remarks)

Личная подпись (Signature)

You have received a letter from your English-speaking

friend Mary who writes

I'd love to know more about your home town. Where is it and how many people live there? What is there in your town?

I have to stop now because I'm going to meet my best friend. We spend every afternoon together...

Write a letter to Mary, who has just moved to a new house.

In your letter:

- Tell her about your home town;

- Answer her questions

Write 100-120 words. Remember the rules of writing.

Sterlitamak

Russia

31 January 2016

Dear Mary , (Greeting)

Thanks for your letter. (Opening remarks)

First of all, I hope you will be very happy in your new house. I look forward to hearing all about it. (благодарность+ссылка на будущие контакты)

В своем письме ты спрашивал меня … (ответы на вопросы+ слова связки)In your letter you asked me about… My home town is in the South of Russia. It is quite a small town and about ten thousand people live there. The town has three schools, a station and different kinds of shops. There are lots of things to do in my town. You can go to the swimming pool or the cinema, or you can walk in the beautiful park in the centre of the town. There are also several cafes and restaurants.

I’d better finish here because my mum is calling me to come and help her. Come and visit me soon. Мне пора идти. Напиши мне (надежда на будущие контакты)

Best wishes,

Lena

Адрес

В правом верхнем углу

Порядок написания:

номер квартиры/ дома, улица, район, город, страна

7, 44, Vokzalnaya Street, Magnitogorsk, Russia/ Russian Federation

Дата: день/ месяц/ год

31.01.2016 или 31 st January 2016

ВНИМАНИЕ! Свой адрес, а не адрес друга

При проверке цифра – одно слово

Приветствие/ обращение (Greeting)

• Вступление

(Opening remarks)

Dear

Hi/ Hello

• Как дела?
• Как здоровье
• Ссылка на полученное письмо
• How are you?
• It was great to get your letter!
• I’m glad you’re OK

Hey Tom

Сокращения it’s/ I’ve/ you’re

при проверке – одно слово

                        Opening remarks: 1. Sorry I haven’t been in touch for a while but I’ve been really busy.  Anyway, I’ve finally got   some time, so I thought I’d drop you a line and tell you about ….. 2. Thanks for your letter. It is always great to hear from you. As for me, I’m really busy. 3. Sorry that I haven’t written for ages, but I’ve been busy studying. 4. Thank you for your letter. I’m sorry I didn’t answer earlier, but I was busy with my end of term   exams. 5. I thought you might be interested to hear about/know that ….. 6. This is just to let you know that …… 7. Sorry I haven’t been in touch for a while

Основная часть (Main body)

• Детально раскрывается цель письма и даются ответы адресату на заданные в письме вопросы.
• Каждая новая тема - с нового абзаца.
• Абзацев – не менее 3-х.
• Последний абзац- 3 вопроса адресату согласно заданию.
• Должно быть 100-120 слов (ГИА ). Меньше 89 слов получаете технический « 0».
• 100-140 слов ( ЕГЭ )(90-154)

Подсчёт слов:

• Артикли и предлоги( a, the, to, at ),
• Местоимения с сокращёнными вспомогательными глаголами ( I'm, he's, we'll, I've, well-paid,e-mail,TV,CD-rom ) считаются как одно слово.
• Адрес и дата тоже включены в подсчёт: цифры (twenty-three – одно слово ), даты (01.06.2013 – одно слово ).

Вопросы должны быть развернутые,

желательно разных типов

Основная часть (Main body)

Ответы на вопросы друга по переписке:

As for me…/ I personally think

You asked me about…/ You wanted to know if…

Предложения-связки перед вопросами другу:

(Now) tell me about your…/ Tell me more about

You mentioned …(taking music lessons)

You wrote you had.. (watched a new film)

                         Closing remarks 1.  I’d better finish here because my mum is calling me to come and help her. Come and visit me soon. 2.  I hope I’ve been of some help. Let me know what happens. 3.  Drop me a line as soon as possible. 4.  That’s all my news! I’d better go and do some work now. 5.  Please write soon and tell me all your news. 6.  Drop me a line and tell me all your news. 7.  Well, that’s all for now. Do drop me a line. 8.  I look forward to hearing from you. 9.  Write back soon and tell me your news. 10. Well, that’s all from me. Got to go now.

Заключение (Closing remarks)

Нейтральная фраза: Write (back) soon

Личная подпись (Signature)

Yours

Love/ With love/ lots of love

Best/ Warm wishes

Нейтральная фраза: Best wishes

Заключение

• Личная подпись

(Closing remarks)

(Signature)

Завершающие фразы

• Love
• Best wishes
• + свое имя

I’m looking forward to hearing from you

Looking forward to your reply (to your next letter)

Please, write soon and tell me

Личная подпись и имя в левом нижнем углу, на разных строчках

Список полезных слов и выражений

Вступление (Opening remarks)

Thanks for your letter

I was happy/ glad to get/ receive your letter

I was sorry to hear that…(you’re sick)

Sorry I didn’t write earlier/ Sorry I’ve taken so long to reply, but…

Нейтральные фразы: Sorry it took me so long to write, but I have been very busy at school. It was great to get your letter!

Подсчет количества слов и исправления на черновике!

Не приступайте к написанию письма сразу на бланке!

Если объем письма большой:

1. Краткий адрес, дата цифрами

2. Полные формы сократить: do not = don’t;

3. Эмоционально окрашенные слова можно безболезненно опустить:

I was very much excited - I was excited

4. Длинные фразы заменить на более короткие синонимы

a lot of - lots of/ many/ much

How much time does it take you..? - How much does it take you...?

Best wishes – Best

I’m looking forward to hearing from you- Please, write soon

Have you ever been to a foreign country? - Have you ever been abroad?

5. Опустить фразы, не влияющие на смысл письма

Thank you very much for your letter! I was really glad to hear from you! –

Thank you very much for your letter!