Работа 1 Текст личного письма учащегося (с сохранением орфографии и пунктуации оригинала) 3,12, Minusinskay Street Moscow, Russia 1.12. 2010

Работа 1

Текст личного письма учащегося (с сохранением орфографии и пунктуации оригинала)

3,12, Minusinskay Street

Moscow, Russia

1.12. 2010

Dear Andrea,

I see you’re not OK with your mum. I don’t want to ask how it is going.

Unfortunately, I have the same problem with my mum as well. But my friends and I don’t collect

anything. We loose our money in different cafes. We all like coffee very much, that’s why we go

somewhere almost every day. Moreover, we sometimes meet someone’s parents in the café! May

be they are angry at home because they’ve got no free space outside the house.

Wow, courses! What subjects did you take? Do you like them? And when do you have free time

now that we could meet and go anywhere?

I hope to hear from you soon!

Best wishes

Vania

Работу учащегося можно оценить в три балла, по моему мнению,

К1 – 1 балл содержание отражает не все аспекты,

К2 – 1 балл имеются отдельные нарушения принятых норм оформления личного письма

К3 – 1 балл имеются пунктуационные ошибки, не затрудняющие понимания текста

Работа 2.

Текст личного письма учащейся (с сохранением орфографии и пунктуации оригинала)

Moscow, Russia

1/12/2010

Dear Andrea,

How are you keeping? Thank you for your letter. I am getting on well. Sorry, I was a little bit

busy and couldn’t answer you earlier.

Well, I understand your situation quiet well, because I like to spend much money on shopping

too. It makes me pleased! However, my Mum doesn’t like when I spend the money, she wants

me to be economy. And as for my Dad, he things that it’s not his business.

I nearly forgot, I collect shoes! It isn’t the souvenirs but it’s also great. Every two months I buy a

new pair, and I spend my pocket money for it.

I usually spend my pocket on buying new clothes, books, films or on going to the café and my

close friends spend their pocket money in the same way.

As for your news, what courses have you got? Are they interesting? Did you learn anything new

from them?

Drop me a line as soon as you can.

Yours,

Natasha

 Работу учащегося можно оценить также в три балла, по моему мнению,

Во первых в письме более 154 слов, что допустимо, тут мы имеем 167 слов, соответственно отсчитав 140 слов мы имеем следующую картину:

К1 – 1 балл содержание отражает не все аспекты,

К2 – 1 балл имеются отдельные нарушения принятых норм оформления личного письма

К3 – 1 балл имеются пунктуационные ошибки, не затрудняющие понимания текста

 Задание С2. Письменное высказывание с элементами рассуждения («Ваше мнение»)

Работа 1

Письменное высказывание с элементами рассуждения (высказывание мнения) (с сохранением орфографии и пунктуации оригинала)

Many people enjoy watching soap operas and spend all evenings living life of the soap

opera characters. Is it really a good way to spend your leisure time?

In my opinion soap operas are the most dull and less interesting product of TV industry.

First of all, they are very long and the plot is primitive. I’d better solve my own problems than

watch difficulties in other people’s life. Secondly, the acting in such kind of movies is awful.

The actors who play in soap operas do not deserve to be called actors, because very often they

are not able to act. Thirdly, soap operas are really useless, because they don’t give food for your

brain. There is nothing to think about and reflect on in the soap operas.

However, many people find soap operas enjoyable and realistic. They think that these

movies state universal problems. I can’t agree with such arguments, because in every soap opera

there is only one problem: someone is really ill or perished, and others cry over spilt milk. All

emotions are exaggerated in soap operas that’s why I can’t agree with the statement that they are

realistic.

To sum up, I am not one of those who enjoy soap operas. I suppose that there are far

pleasanter and useful ways of spending free time. I don’t mind of people watching soap operas,

but it is certainly not my choice.

Работу можно оценить в 13 баллов

К1 – 3 балла

К2 – 3 балла

К3 – 2 балла (словарный запас соответствует коммуникативной задаче, однако встречаются небольшие неточности)

К4 – 3 балла

К5 – 2 балла (орфографические ошибки практически отсутствуют)

Работа 2

Письменное высказывание с элементами рассуждения (высказывание мнения) (с сохранением орфографии и пунктуации оригинала)

Nowadays lots of people watch soap operas. They find them realistic and enjoyable.

However, I strongly believe that it is a useless waste of time.

To start with, soap operas have no educational value. They don’t contain any scientific

information.

Soap operas can have a negative effect. As they often show murders and robberies.

Finally, there is no artistic value in them. The script is simple, the actors perform badly.

But soap operas help some people to relax. I think soap operas are not worth seeing it’s

better to read a book.

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Работу можно оценить в 0 баллов, К1 – 0 баллов в связи с несоответствием объему (минимальное количество слов 180) в данном письме 94, работа не проверяется вообще.