ГИА английский язык презентация (письмо)

Writing (get ready for the examination)

9 grade

Составлено учителем

  английского языка

МБОУ «Гимназия №31»

Шадрухина М.А.,

высшей квалификационной категории

Рекомендуемое время, отводимое на письмо – 80минут

Задание 33(С1) –Письмо личного характера (базовый уровень) –15- 20 минут (10 баллов)

Критерии оценивания письма ГИА по английскому

Максимальное число баллов, которыми оценивается письмо на английском на ГИА, это 10 баллов. Из них выделяют 4 критерия оценивания

• Решение коммуникативной задачи – максимальная оценка – 3 балла. Данные полные ответы на три заданных вопроса. Правильно выбрано обращение, завершающая фраза и подпись. Есть благодарность, упоминания о предыдущих контактах, выражена надежда на будущие контакты.
• Организация текста – 2 балла. Текст логично выстроен и разделён на абзацы. Правильно использованы языковые средства для передачи логичной связи. Оформление текста соответствует нормам.
• Лексико-грамматическое оформление текста- 3 балла. Использованы разнообразная лексика и грамматические структуры, соответствующие поставленной коммуникативной задаче.
• Орфография и пунктуация – 2 балла. Орфографические и пунктуационные ошибки практически отсутствуют (допускается не более 2-х, не затрудняющих понимания текста).

  You have 20 minutes to do this task. You have received a letter from your pen-friend Tom who writes:

… We’ve moved to a new town. It’s small and green. My neighbours say that it hasn’t changed a bit for the last two centuries. Have you noticed any recent changes in your city? What are they? Do you like or dislike them? Why?

Yesterday my mum won a cooking competition…

Write a letter to Tom.  

In your letter

       − answer his questions

  Write 100 – 120 words .

Remember the rules of letter writing.

address

1.

date

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greeting

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opening remarks

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main body

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questions

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closing remarks

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e nding

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si gn off

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1. Kurgan

Russia

16/03/15

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greeting

3.

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opening remarks

4.

5.

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main body

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6.

questions

.

closing remarks

7.

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ending

8.

sign off

9.

1. Kurgan

Russia

date

2.

,

greeting

3.

.

opening remarks

4.

5.

.

main body

?

6.

questions

.

closing remarks

7.

,

ending

8.

sign off

9.

1. Kurgan

Russia

16/03/15

2.

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Dear Tom

3.

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opening remarks

4.

5.

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main body

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6.

Questions (???)

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closing remarks

7.

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ending

8.

sign off

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1. Kurgan

Russia

16/03/15

,

2.

Dear Tom

3.

4.

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Thanks for writing to me

I was very glad to get your letter

Thank you for your recent letter

Thank you so much for the last letter.

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5.

main body

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6.

Questions (???)

.

closing remarks

7.

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ending

8.

sign off

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1. Kurgan

Russia

16/03/15

2.

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Dear Tom

3.

4.

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Thanks for writing to me

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5.

I’d like to tell you that…

As you are interested in…

Well, I can say that…

Well, you ask me about…

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6.

Questions (???)

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7.

closing remarks

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ending

8.

s ign off

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1. Kurgan

Russia

16/03/15

2.

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Dear Tom

3.

4.

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Thanks for writing to me

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5.

I’d like to tell you that…

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Questions (???)

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7.

Well, that’s all for now.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Write back soon

Please, write to me soon

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ending

8.

sign off

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1. Kurgan

Russia

16/03/15

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Dear Tom

3.

4.

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Thanks for writing to me

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5.

Well, you ask me about…

?

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6.

Questions (???)

7.

Please, write to me soon

,

Best wishes

With love

All the best

Yours

8.

sign off

9.

1. Kurgan

Russia

16/03/15

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Dear Tom

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Thanks for writing to me

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5.

Well, you ask me about…

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Questions (???)

7.

Please, write to me soon

,

Best wishes

8.

Maria

9.

Use this model, as an example

Kurgan

Russia

23/10/15

Dear…,

I was so happy to get your letter! I can’t wait to meet you in July! I’m sorry

I haven’t answered earlier but I was really busy with my school.

You asked me to tell you about… Well, I’d like to tell you that……

By the way, …? …? …?

Unfortunately, I’d better go now as I’ve got loads of homework to do

(as always).

Please write me soon.

All the best,

Marina

При проверки письма:

• Требуемый объём личного письма 100-120 слов. Допустимое отклонение -10%
• Начинаем считать с адреса и заканчиваем подписью.
• Особенности подсчёта:

• краткие формы считаются за одно слово (I’m, We’ll, didn’t, I’ve, it’s, doesn’t, wasn’t)
• числительные, выраженные цифрами (2009; 24/11/2014; 25%)- одно слово
• Числительные, выраженные словами(twenty-one) считаются как одно слово
• Но (24 November 2014) - три слова
• Сложные слова (English-speaking, good-looking) – одно слово
• Сокращения(UK, e-mail, sms, TV) считаются как одно слово

Parts of the letter are mixed. Put them in the correct order.

• Best wishes
• If we can’t stay outdoors, could you find out what we could do indoors? Perhaps we could go to a museum or somewhere else.
• I’m glad to learn that you’re having fun in London. By the way, I’m coming to see you next weekend , and I’m really looking forward to joining you.
• Thank you for your last letter. Sorry, I haven’t written sooner, but I’ve been very busy at school.
• Martin
• I hope it won’t rain because I’d also like to visit some of London’s famous parks. I’ve heard that Hyde Park is really beautiful in autumn.
• I’m finishing, I have to do some homework. See you on Friday evening.
• Dear Emma,
• First of all, I’d like to go on the London Eye. I’ve heard that the views are fantastic, especially if the weather is good.

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Parts of the letter are mixed. Put them in the correct order.

H. Dear Emma,

D . Thank you for your last letter. Sorry, I haven’t written sooner, but I’ve been very busy at school.

C. I’m glad to learn that you’re having fun in London. By the way, I’m coming to see you next weekend , and I’m really looking forward to joining you.

I. First of all, I’d like to go on the London Eye. I’ve heard that the views are fantastic, especially if the weather is good.

B. If we can’t stay outdoors, could you find out what we could do indoors? Perhaps we could go to a museum or somewhere else.

F. I hope it won’t rain because I’d also like to visit some of London’s famous parks. I’ve heard that Hyde Park is really beautiful in autumn.

G. I’m finishing, I have to do some homework. See you on Friday evening.

A. Best wishes,

E. Martin

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Kurgan

06/06/13

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Best wishes,

Danil.

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Kurgan

Russia

06/06/13

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Best wishes,

Danil

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Kurgan

Russia

06/06/13

Hi Tom

I am glad to have got your letter.

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Best wishes,

Danil

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Kurgan

Russia

06/06/13

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to know that you are all right.

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Best wishes,

Danil

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Kurgan

Russia

06/06/13

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to know that you are all right.

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I wonder if your parents will go with you?

Best wishes,

Danil

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Kurgan

Russia

06/06/13

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to know that you are all right.

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I wonder if your parents will go with you.

Best wishes,

Danil

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Kurgan

Russia

06/06/13

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to know that you are all right.

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I wonder if your parents will go with you.

I could continue, but I’ve got to go now.

Best wishes,

Danil

Writing an informal letter

• Are these statements about writing informal letters true or false ?
• 1. It’s normal to use contractions, like they’re for they are, in informal letters. T/F
• 2. You don’t need to use paragraphs in informal letters . T/F
• 3.Planning what to write is less important for informal letters than for formal letters. T/F
• 4. You should try to make informal letters as interesting as possible , for example by using a range of verbs and adjectives. T/F
• 5. The most common tense used in informal letters is the Present Continuous. T/F
• 6. Informal letters tend to be shorter than formal letters. T/F
• 7. You should think carefully about the reader of informal letters. T/F

The right answers

• 1. T;
• 2. F;
• 3. T;
• 4. T;
• 5. F;
• 6. F;
• 7. T;

The right answers

• 1. It’s normal to use contractions, like they’re for they are, in informal letters.
• 3. Planning what to write is less important for informal letters than for formal letters.
• 4. You should try to make informal letters as interesting as possible , for example by using a range of verbs and adjectives.
• 7. You should think carefully about the reader of informal letters.

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Kurgan

Russia

06/06/13

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to know that you are all right.

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I wonder if your parents will go with you.

I could continue, but I’ve got to go now. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

Danil

РАЗДЕЛ 4 (ЗАДАНИЕ ПО ПИСЬМЕННОЙ РЕЧИ)

You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend Christine.

… I am very busy now arranging my summer holidays. Yesterday I went to the travel agent’s. The thing is I’d like to practice Russian and see the country. I was offered some language schools but I chose the one in Saint Petersburg.

… Do you think it’s a good idea to choose a language school in Saint Petersburg, why? What sights would you recommend to see in Saint Petersburg? What’s the weather like in this northern city at the end of July?

Write Christine a letter and answer her 3 questions.

Write 100-120 words. Remember the rules of letter writing.

Use this model, like an example.

Kurgan

Russia

23/10/15

Dear…,

I was so happy to get your letter! I can’t wait to meet you in July! I’m sorry

I haven’t answered earlier but I was really busy with my school.

You asked me to tell you about… Well, I’d like to tell you that……

By the way, …? …? …?

Unfortunately, I’d better go now as I’ve got loads of homework to do

(as always).

Please write me soon.

All the best,

Marina