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Correct mistakes in this personal letter.

Dear Jane,

Next month was the ninetieth birthday of my mother and we are so thankful to the fortune for giving her such a long and happy life.
To mark this occasion, we will organized a party and we invite you to a party. My mother and the whole family will be very happy to see you. We will celebrate mother's birthday in the garden. Next month is october, it's Autumn and it's very cold outside, that's why we ask you to take your fur coat. We tell you the time later .
I hope you can find time to attend the birthday party.
Thank you and hope to see you soon.

Sincerely - Adam Jet!!!

Correct mistakes in this personal letter.

Dear Jane,

Next month was the ninetieth birthday of my mother and we are so thankful to the fortune for giving her such a long and happy life.
To mark this occasion, we will organized a party and we invite you to a party. My mother and the whole family will be very happy to see you. We will celebrate mother's birthday in the garden. Next month is october, it's Autumn and it's very cold outside, that's why we ask you to take your fur coat. We tell you the time later .
I hope you can find time to attend the birthday party.
Thank you and hope to see you soon.

Sincerely - Adam Jet!!!

Correct mistakes in this personal letter.

Dear Jane,

Next month was the ninetieth birthday of my mother and we are so thankful to the fortune for giving her such a long and happy life.
To mark this occasion, we will organized a party and we invite you to a party. My mother and the whole family will be very happy to see you. We will celebrate mother's birthday in the garden. Next month is october, it's Autumn and it's very cold outside, that's why we ask you to take your fur coat. We tell you the time later .
I hope you can find time to attend the birthday party.
Thank you and hope to see you soon.

Sincerely - Adam Jet!!!

Correct mistakes in this personal letter.

Dear Jane,

Next month was the ninetieth birthday of my mother and we are so thankful to the fortune for giving her such a long and happy life.
To mark this occasion, we will organized a party and we invite you to a party. My mother and the whole family will be very happy to see you. We will celebrate mother's birthday in the garden. Next month is october, it's Autumn and it's very cold outside, that's why we ask you to take your fur coat. We tell you the time later .
I hope you can find time to attend the birthday party.
Thank you and hope to see you soon.

Sincerely - Adam Jet!!!